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The diagram shows Underground Station numbers in London

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The diagram illustrates how Underground Station Passengers Numbers in London changes over a period from 6 a. m. to 22. 00 p. m. At 6 a. m. they stand at 100 people and an hour later the number of passengers doubles. This follows by another increase, although much steeper at 8 a. m, when passengers almost 200 people higher than at 7 a. m. However, this upward trend suddenly breaks and passengers plummet dramatically over the next two hours to reach a little about 170 people at 10 a. m. At lunchtime passengers rise back to 9 a. m. levels, but they dramatically drops again at 16 p. m. At 18 p. m. there a high increase about 350 people, after which the amount of passengers drops again. In the evening the figure levels off and remains relatively static. Overall, Underground Station Passengers in London relatively unchanged at the end of day despite violent fluctuations throughout the day. Besides, they were at their highest at 8 a. m. and 18 p. m. while the weakest passengers could be observed at 6 a. m. and 16 p. m.
The diagram illustrates how Underground Station
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Passengers
Numbers in London
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changes
over a period from 6 a. m. to 22. 00 p. m.

At 6 a. m. they stand at 100
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people
and an hour later the number of
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passengers
doubles. This follows by another increase, although much steeper at 8 a. m, when
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passengers
almost 200
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people
higher than at 7 a. m.
However
, this upward trend
suddenly
breaks and
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passengers
plummet
dramatically
over the
next
two hours to reach a
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little
about 170
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people
at 10 a. m. At lunchtime
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passengers
rise back to 9 a. m. levels,
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but
they
dramatically
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drops
again at 16 p. m. At 18 p. m. there a high increase about 350
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people
, after which the amount of
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passengers
drops again. In the evening the figure levels off and remains
relatively
static.

Overall
, Underground Station
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Passengers
in London
relatively
unchanged at the
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end
of day despite violent fluctuations throughout the day.
Besides
, they were at their highest at 8 a. m. and 18 p. m. while the weakest
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passengers
could
be observed
at 6 a. m. and 16 p. m.
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