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The pie charts compare the amount of energy produced by using five various sources of energy between 1995 and 2005 in France.

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The pie charts compare the amount of energy produced by using five various sources of energy between 1995 and 2005 in France. Overall, coal and gas were the most important sources of energy in the years 1995 and 2005. However, nuclear and other sources of energy/power provided the least amount of energy over the same period. As regards, 29. 80% amount of energy produced from coal in 1995, Which rose slightly by almost 1. 5% to 30. 93% in 2005. Similarly, energy production from gas climbed slowly to 30. 31% from 29. 63% between 1995 and 2005, an increase of around 1% in 10 years. Additionally, there were a dramatic growth of almost 5% in the amount of energy produced from nuclear and other sources of energy from – to – and – to -- over a period of 10 years respectively. Petrol, on the other hand, was the only source of energy which decreased from 29. 27% to 19. 55% in France over the 10-year period.
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