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The pictures below shows the changes of a park from 1980 to now

The pictures below shows the changes of a park from 1980 to now jR8y8
The maps provides information about the design of a park in 1980 and the structure in recent time. Overall, we can see that in 1980 bike head few amenities available for people. Nowadays park consist new features for kids and individuals also improve the infrastructure of park. In 1980 park had two main entrance at NorthWest corner and on East side for individuals. On the west side of park contain pond and bench for the sitting arrangement in 1980. Moreover, south west and South East corner as had flowers area in the park. Eventually, in 1980 park consist trees place on the North East corner. Nowadays, park improve the sum of the facilities and include new features. Park include two new entrance for people. South West and South East flowers corner converted into bush as well as playground for kids, respectively. In recent time West side of park area remained same from 1980. Finally, on North East trees place became picnic and barbecue tree area in present time.
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information about the design of a
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park
in 1980 and the structure in recent time.

Overall
, we can
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that in 1980 bike head few amenities available for
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people
. Nowadays
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park
consist new features for kids and individuals
also
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improve
the infrastructure of park.

In 1980
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park
had two main entrance at
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NorthWest
corner and on East side for individuals. On the west side of
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contain pond and bench for the sitting arrangement in 1980.
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south west
and South East corner as had flowers area in the
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park
.
Eventually
, in 1980
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consist trees place on the North East corner.

Nowadays,
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park
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improve
the sum of the facilities and include new features.
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Park
include two new entrance for
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people
. South West and South East flowers corner converted into bush
as well
as playground for kids,
respectively
. In recent time West side of
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area remained same from 1980.
Finally
, on North East trees place became picnic and barbecue tree area in present time.
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