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The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period. wB7yE
The given graph shows the enrolments of local students and overseas students in Australian universities over a ten year period which is 2001 to 2010. Their are 2 lines graphs given. One is of commencing and one is of total. Students who commenced have a large number in every year from 2001 to 2010 in both Overseas students and local students, but few are able to attend the universities. Firstly, in 2001 to 2002 both overseas and local students have increassed to study in Australian universities. From 2003 to 2004 number of local students have decreased and slightly increased in 2005 and then decreased in 2006. Number of Local students have increased till 2008 and then start falling upto 2010. On the other hand number of overseas students have increased till 2010 without any fall. Overall, students from different nation wheather it is local or overseas, every pupil enrolled for Asutralian universities.
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overseas
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in Australian
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ten year
period which is 2001 to 2010.

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are 2 lines graphs
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. One is of commencing and one is of total.
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Students
who commenced have a large
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number
in every year from 2001 to 2010 in both
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Overseas
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students
and
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local
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students
,
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few are able to attend the
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universities
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, in 2001 to 2002 both
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overseas
and
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local
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students
have
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increassed
to study in Australian
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universities
. From 2003 to 2004
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number
of
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local
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students
have decreased and
slightly
increased in 2005 and then decreased in 2006.
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of
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Local
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students
have increased till 2008 and then
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start
falling
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upto
2010.
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number
of
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overseas
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students
have increased till 2010 without any fall.

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,
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students
from
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different
nation
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it is
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or
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, every pupil enrolled for
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Asutralian
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IELTS academic The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period.

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