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The graph below shows information on employment rates across 6 countries in 1995 and 2005.

The graph below shows information on employment rates across 6 countries in 1995 and 2005. MMqXo
The bar chart illustrates six different countries, in terms of the employment rates of both genders for the years 1995 and 2005 Overall, there was an upward trend in the proportion of male and female employment over the period given. During both years, Iceland had the highest employment rate for men and Switzerland had the highest for women. In 1995, Iceland experienced an employment rate of around 70% for males and it was followed by Switzerland, New Zealand, the USA, the UK, and Australia. After a decade, these figures went up steadily in all six countries. Iceland’s and Switzerland’s men had the rate of more than 75% while the figures for the other countries stood at nearly 70%. Women in Switzerland and the UK had a higher employment rate, compared to the rest countries in 1995, at over 50%. Over a 10-year period, New Zealand and the USA experience a sharp growth in the figures of females, of over 10%. This trend had been seen in Australia, Switzerland, Iceland, and the UK with changes below 10%
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and Switzerland had the highest for women.

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of around 70% for males and it
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had the
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of more than 75% while the figures for the other
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in 1995, at
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IELTS academic The graph below shows information on employment rates across 6 countries in 1995 and 2005.

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