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air pollution levels by different causes among four countries in 2021

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The bar chart describes air pollution rates among four main countries in 2021; by measuring levels in three sectors, which are electricity, transport and industry. Overall, China had the most polluted air, while Australia’s atmosphere remained the least contaminated in the period given. However, electricity generation produced the lowest levels of pollutants everywhere apart from the latter. To start with, China's most pollution from industry with 80 PPM while vehicles are producing 70 PPM. In comparison, pollution from electricity generations is the lowest with 59 PPM. Japan’s profile bears some resemblance, but proportionally much smaller, with these three indexes being 42, 30 and 10 PPM, the lowest figure overall, respectively. Moving to the other two countries, America was the only nation where transportation was the primary polluter at 54 PPM, followed by industry and electricity production, at 38 and 30 PPM, respectively. Australia, in contrast, had collectively the lowest level of air pollution, with all indexes being below 20 PPM.

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