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The pictures below show the recycling process of wasted glass bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make a comparison where relevant

The pictures below show the recycling process of wasted glass bottles. Ypwm
The process chart a waste highlights the recycling process of wasted glass bottles in three stages respectively. At a glance, it is observed that the whole process done by the professionalist and systematically. Primarily in the stage I All wasted glass bottles are collected and placed at collection point than it further transport to the place where the actual recycling process begins. At stage 2, bottles are wash by high - pressure water and than s sent to the glass factory where bottles are converted into ting glass pieces heated at the temperature of 600°C - 800°C in burning furnace. Moreover post burning pieces the recycled liquid glass or the new liquid glass are shaped in the glass mould. In the stage 3, the new recycled bottles are formed and ready for dispatch to the supermarket where the products are finally set for sale or consume by local people. Finally it can delivered as the process of recycling the wasted bottles are performed stage wise and the prominent factors burning of glass pieces in the furnace at the given temperature.
The
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process
chart a waste highlights the recycling
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process
of wasted
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glass
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bottles
in three
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stages
respectively
.

At a glance, it
is observed
that the whole
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process
done by the
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professionalist
and
systematically
.
Primarily
in the
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stage
I All wasted
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glass
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bottles
are collected
and placed at collection point than it
further
transport to the place where the actual recycling
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process
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begins
. At
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stage
2,
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bottles
are wash by high
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-
pressure water and
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than
s
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sent
to the
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glass
factory where
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bottles
are converted
into ting
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glass
pieces heated at the temperature of
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600°C
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-
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800°C
in burning furnace.
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Moreover
post burning pieces the recycled liquid
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glass
or the new liquid
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glass
are shaped
in the
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glass
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mould
. In the
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stage
3, the new recycled
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bottles
are formed
and ready for dispatch to the supermarket where the products are
finally
set for sale or consume by local
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people
.

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Finally
it can
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delivered
as the
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process
of recycling the wasted
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bottles
are performed
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stage
wise and the prominent factors burning of
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glass
pieces in the furnace at the
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given
temperature.
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IELTS academic The pictures below show the recycling process of wasted glass bottles.

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  American English
3 paragraphs
180 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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