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The table below gives information about the value of exports of kiwi fruits from new Zealand to five countries between 2010 and 2013

The table below gives information about the value of exports of kiwi fruits from new Zealand to five countries between 2010 and 2013 G69Q
The table chart illustrates the information regarding how many kiwi fruits were exported in different five countries namely japan, china, Mexico, Russia and Saudi Arabia from 2010 to 2012. Overall, as evident from the chart, the maximum amount of exportation of kiwi fruits by japan throughout the period. While minimum recorded in Saudi Arabia. In 2010, japan exported kiwi fruits was $ 271, 100, 00. After that, this exportation trend rose by roughly 6, 000, 000 dollars in next two years. Similarly, the figure for china also witnessed inclining trend at $ 74, 900, 000 in first year which increased by $ 10, 000, 000 in next each year. Likewise, the exportation of kiwi fruits in Russia experienced growth from $ 9, 68, 000 in 2010 to $2, 404, 000 in 2012. However, the amount of kiwi exported by Mexico started at $ 6, 000, 000 in first year but in next two year it showed a declining trend which were $ 2, 400, 000 and $ 3, 300, 000 respectively. Following the similar trend, Saudi Arabia which exported kiwi fruits of only $ 290, 000 in 2010 and after that decreased by $100, 000 in 2011 as well as in last year it experienced dramatic fall arounnd $82, 000 which was least amount of kiwi fruits exportation as compared to other countries.
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IELTS academic The table below gives information about the value of exports of kiwi fruits from new Zealand to five countries between 2010 and 2013

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