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The monthly price of exported rice from Thailand and Vietnam from 2012 to 2015 (Million dollars per ton)

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The given line graph illustrated the price of rice export per month of Thailand and Vietnam over a period of 4 years. Overall, the monthly price of exported rice from Thailand and Vietnam were unstable between 2012 and 2015. Moreover, the export price in Vietnam was lower than the figure for Thailand’s rice export in each year given. From January to May in 2012, the price of exported rice per month in Thailand and Vietnam witnessed a slight decline, from $500 and $400 million to about $440 and $365 million per ton respectively. After 7 months, these figures saw significant changes, reaching their highest points of $550 and $400 million in December accordingly. In 2013, the monthly price of exported rice from Thailand gradually dropped from $550 to $400 US million dollars over a period of a year. Meanwhile, Vietnam's figure stood at the highest point of 365 million dollars in January and slightly fell to 340 million dollars in July before rising to 350 million dollars at the end of the period. In 2014, while Vietnam’s figure stood at about 330 in the first month of the year and did not change too much, which was at around 320 in December, the figure for Thailand’s rice export witnessed a slight drop, from 450 in January to 400 in March before rising by 80. In 2015, the price of exported rice from Thailand in January stood $410 million and fluctuated, which reached its highest point of 490. Meanwhile, Vietnam’s figure rose from 300 to about 370 in the first 6 months before dropped by 55.
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of Thailand and Vietnam over a period of 4 years.

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from Thailand and Vietnam were unstable between 2012 and 2015.
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in Vietnam was lower than the
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for Thailand’s
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in each year
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From January to May in 2012, the
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in Thailand and Vietnam witnessed a slight decline, from $500 and $400
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to about $440 and $365
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, reaching their highest points of $550 and $400
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in December
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over a period of a year. Meanwhile, Vietnam's
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in January and
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too much, which was at around 320 in December, the
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for Thailand’s
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witnessed a slight drop, from 450 in January to 400 in March
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rising by 80. In 2015, the
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from Thailand in January stood $410
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and fluctuated, which reached its highest point of 490. Meanwhile, Vietnam’s
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dropped by 55.
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IELTS academic The monthly price of exported rice from Thailand and Vietnam from 2012 to 2015 (Million dollars per ton)

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