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The map depicts the information about city hospital which changed in 2007 and 2010.

The map depicts the information about city hospital which changed in 2007 and 2010. Kw15w
The couple of supplied layouts illustrates how a city hospital was accessed in 2007 and 2010. Overall, it is clear that extensive modifications infrastructure of the city hospital. Except the main premsis of the city hospital, everything else was altered. As it can be seen from the first map, in 2007 the city hospital, which was encircled by king road, was located in north, whereas city road was sited in south. King road and city road were connected via hospital road. On the both sides of hospital road, there were multiple bus stops. To the east of hospital road, a common car park for both public and staff wad provide and entry to this car park was given from king road.
The couple of supplied layouts illustrates how a city
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infrastructure of the city
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hospital
. Except the main
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hospital
, everything else
was altered
. As it can be
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seen
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map, in 2007 the city
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hospital
, which
was encircled
by king
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,
was located
in north, whereas city
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was sited
in south. King
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road
and city
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road
were connected
via
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hospital
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. On the both sides of
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hospital
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road
, there were multiple bus
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stops
. To the east of
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hospital
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road
, a common car park for both public and staff wad provide and entry to this car park was
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given
from king
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IELTS academic The map depicts the information about city hospital which changed in 2007 and 2010.

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