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The pie chart gives information of percentages of students in north western university.

The pie chart gives information of percentages of students in north western university. BYV8a
The given two pie charts illustrate data about the percentages of students who got admission in North western University by faculties and Art students. To begin with, art students has the highest percentage, with 23 % among all faculties. While, the lowest percentage gained by medicine faculty by just 5%, correspondingly. Moreover, the department of computer, science observed almost similar marks, it accounting for 22%and 21%, respectively. In contrast, the students from Engineering and Law are less interested with 9 %and 6 %, respectively. Moving ahead, approximately, 79 art students are loved to join in North Western University, which is the highest ratio among all countries. Although, only 2, 4, and 6 students from African, Australian, and Asian showed interest to go in it. In terms of Europian, 21 students are going to North Western University. Overall, it can be clearlt seen that a majority of students are study in arts, where as medicine is a least famous among students.
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admission in North western University by faculties and
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. To
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has the highest percentage, with 23 % among all faculties. While, the lowest percentage gained by medicine faculty by
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for 22%and 21%,
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from Engineering and Law are less interested with 9
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in North Western University, which is the highest ratio among all countries. Although,
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2, 4, and 6
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students
from African, Australian, and Asian
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Europian
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are going to North Western University.

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