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Changes made in frenton from 1990 and 2012.

Changes made in frenton from 1990 and 2012. WE2lk
The map in Emirates the major changes made in ntonTTrentonBrentonntonTTrentonBrentonnto between 1990 and 2012. Overalloverall, comedy sprinkler seen that the right side of history completely transformed in a 2012. How will come on the left side few changes took place from 1990 to 2012. Holi bola at the fleeting glance it is widely seen that in a 1998 there was a playing field with treesin Oxford direction. While in 2012 it converted into block of flats. Towards west side there was a hospital in front of High Street but in 2012 it completely become modernized and area of hospital expand. Along with it on right side bank replaced the restaurant in later year. In Southwest corner of frenton before there was trees. However, now that area development into technopark. Moving towards left side of high street side. In 1990 a theatre was built in south direction. In 2012 a cinema was constructed on its place. At the lower side of it in south east direction there were shops in 1990 but in 2012 it transformed into supermarket. On the left side of high street large area was occupied by cafe and park while in 2012 it renovates into hotel and golf park. In front side of it there was houses constructed. Afterwards in year 2012 it modernized into block of flats. A small area on the top of north side in year 1990 was free. While in 2012, flats were constructed on free place.
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made in
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between 1990 and 2012.

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Overalloverall
, comedy sprinkler
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that the right side of history completely transformed in a 2012. How will
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come
on the
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left
side few
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changes
took place from 1990 to 2012.

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Holi
bola at the fleeting glance it is
widely
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seen
that in a 1998 there was a playing field with
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treesin
Oxford direction.
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in 2012 it converted into block of flats. Towards west side there was a hospital in front of High Street
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but
in 2012 it completely
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become
modernized and
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area
of hospital expand. Along with it on right side bank replaced the restaurant in later year. In Southwest corner of
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frenton
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before
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there was trees
.
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,
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now
that
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area
development into
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technopark
.

Moving towards
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left
side of high street side. In 1990 a
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theatre
was built
in south direction. In 2012 a cinema
was constructed
on its place. At the lower side of it in
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south east
direction there were shops in 1990
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in 2012 it transformed into supermarket. On the
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left
side of high street large
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area
was occupied
by
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cafe
and park while in 2012 it renovates into hotel and golf park. In front side of it there was
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houses
constructed. Afterwards in year 2012 it modernized into block of flats. A
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small
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area
on the top of north side in year 1990 was free. While in 2012, flats
were constructed
on free place.
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IELTS academic Changes made in frenton from 1990 and 2012.

Academic
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244 words
6.0
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