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The pictures below show how tomato ketchup made. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features

The diagram explains the process for the making of tomato ketchup. There are a total of 15 stages in the advance, beginning with the picking tomatoes and enjoying the delicious taste of ketchup during the eating time. The first step is that tomatoes are collected and placed in baskets. After that, they are separated to the groups, where only high quality products are able to move to the next stage. Once standardized tomatoes allocated into the boxes, they are purified some nonessential parts, such as removing stalks, skin, seeds. Having been layed in a container, tomatoes are crushed, in order to become a liquid. At this point, different flavoring species can be added. Next, starts the next stage - boiling. The prepared boiled fluid is left for two hours, in order to have cooling in the mixture, which then can easily separated into bottles. Before boxes are loaded onto lorries, they are labelled by company's name, checked for quality. Finally, you can buy the product in the supermarket and add it into your lovely fast food.
The diagram
explains
the process for the making of tomato ketchup. There are a total of 15 stages in the advance, beginning with the picking tomatoes and enjoying the delicious taste of ketchup during the eating time. The
first
step is that tomatoes
are collected
and placed in baskets. After that, they
are separated
to the groups, where
only
high quality products are able to
move
to the
next
stage. Once standardized tomatoes allocated into the boxes, they
are purified
some
nonessential parts, such as removing stalks, skin, seeds. Having been
layed
in a container, tomatoes
are crushed
, in order to become a liquid. At this point,
different
flavoring species can be
added
.
Next
,
starts
the
next
stage
-
boiling. The prepared boiled fluid is
left
for two hours, in order to have cooling in the mixture, which then can
easily
separated
into bottles.
Before
boxes
are loaded
onto
lorries
, they
are labelled
by
company
's name,
checked
for quality.
Finally
, you can
buy
the product in the supermarket and
add
it into your lovely
fast
food.
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IELTS academic The pictures below show how tomato ketchup made.

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
176 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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