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The picture show the process od making cherry jam

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We want to explain the stages of prodechion of cherry jam. there are meny stages to for production of it, that involve picking the fruit from the trees and tronsport to the factory and production of chery jam. First a sheet is spread an the ground and the trees are shaken by machin then the cherries is collected and transpored to the factory. Next leaves and stems are removed from fruit. the cheeries are washed ofter then, the stones taked out from fruit. next sugar, limon and peting added to the cherries and jam is ready to cooked. then jam is checked ond put to the Jar. finally the lables are stuck on th jam jars and jam is ready to sell
We want to
explain
the stages of
prodechion
of cherry jam.
there
are
meny
stages to for production of it, that involve picking the fruit from the trees and
tronsport
to the factory and production of
chery
jam.

First
a sheet
is spread
an
the ground and the trees
are shaken
by
machin
then the cherries
is collected
and
transpored
to the factory.

Next
leaves
and stems
are removed
from fruit.

the
cheeries
are washed
ofter
then
, the
stones taked
out from fruit.
next
sugar,
limon
and
peting
added
to the cherries and jam is ready to cooked.

then
jam is
checked
ond
put to the Jar.

finally
the
lables
are stuck
on
th
jam jars and jam is ready to sell
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IELTS academic The picture show the process od making cherry jam

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  American English
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121 words
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