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Why do people do things by hand?

Why do people do things by hand? m85nO
People do things by hand for many reasons. Some people are forced to do things by hand. For example when you invite your family at your house and there are burnt lights, so you should maintain these burned lights in a short time. Another reason is, it is a carrier for some people, at the same time they obtain money from doing things such as make doors and tables. Another example is, some people want to do something beautiful and special such as make a scarf. Another example, if you want to save some money. For example when you paint your room with your brothers instead of paying forthe painter. Finally, I see it’s important to do things by hand, to gain experience, also for emergencies.
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you should maintain these burned lights in a short time. Another reason is, it is a carrier for
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people
, at the same time they obtain money from doing things such as
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make
doors and tables. Another
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people
want to do something
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beautiful
and special such as
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make
a scarf.
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, if you want to save
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money. For
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when you paint your room with your brothers
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of paying
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for emergencies.

IELTS academic Why do people do things by hand?

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
126 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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