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EASY WAYS TO HELP YOU STAY HEALTHY

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There are a lot of ways to stay healthy. First, you should have a healthy diet meal. You should eat some foods like fruits and vegetables, a variety of protein foods, and low-fat dairy products. Next, you need to have an enough sleep. A seven to nine hours sleep is very important, it help you improve your health and always keep your spirits up. Exercise regularly is also a good thing for your health. Health experts say that exercise will burn calories, making you mentally refreshed. You should exercise in the morning and have exercises that are suitable for you. Finally, you should have sometimes to relax. Relax helps your mind rest and a good health requires a healthy mind. Relax also helps your body rest and become stronger. This are some way to stay healthy.
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sleep. A seven to nine hours sleep is
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will burn calories, making you mentally refreshed. You should
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in the morning and have
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to relax. Relax
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mind. Relax
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your body rest and become stronger.
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IELTS academic EASY WAYS TO HELP YOU STAY HEALTHY

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