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The table shows contribution of different sectors to the economy of X country in 2016, 2017 and 2018.

The table shows contribution of different sectors to the economy of X country in 2016, 2017 and 2018. kbGXe
The information about the contribution of various sectors to the economy of a nation called X in 2016, 2017 and 2018 is depicted in the rendered table. The data has been calibrated in percentile. Overall, it is vividly manifested that agriculture contributed highest in the last year, whereas the contribution of service sector was least. Interestingly, the contribution of industry sector remained at mid. To embark upon, the contribution of service sector was 65% in 2016. However, after a year, a slight dip was seen in the contribution of service sector, it comprised to 64%. Nevertheless, there was a dramatic decline observed in the service sector contribution, it accounted for 55% in 2018. Moving further, agriculture contributed least among the other sectors with 13% in 2016. Moreover, industry sector contributed roughly one-fifth in 2016. While, the contribution to GDP of agriculture was 11% in 2017, industry contributed merely a quarter in the same year. Surprisingly, there had been a consistent surge in the contribution of agriculture and industry sector, it accounted for 15% and 30% respectively.
The information about the
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contribution
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sectors
to the economy of a nation called X in 2016, 2017 and 2018
is depicted
in the rendered table. The data has
been calibrated
in percentile.

Overall
, it is
vividly
manifested that
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agriculture
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contributed
highest in the last year, whereas the
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contribution
of
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service
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sector
was least.
Interestingly
, the
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contribution
of
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industry
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sector
remained at mid.

To embark upon, the
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contribution
of
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service
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sector
was 65% in 2016.
However
, after a year, a slight dip was
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seen
in the
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contribution
of
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service
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sector
, it comprised to 64%.
Nevertheless
, there was a dramatic decline observed in the
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service
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sector
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contribution
, it accounted for 55% in 2018.

Moving
further
,
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agriculture
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contributed
least among the other
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sectors
with 13% in 2016.
Moreover
,
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industry
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sector
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contributed
roughly one-fifth in 2016. While, the
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contribution
to GDP of
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agriculture
was 11% in 2017,
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industry
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contributed
merely
a quarter in the same year.
Surprisingly
, there had been a consistent surge in the
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contribution
of
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agriculture
and
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industry
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sector
, it accounted for 15% and 30%
respectively
.
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