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bar chart of household taskes bu gender in England .

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this bar chart depicts the minutes for men and women that spend everyday in England. It is clear from the graph that, time that females spend in houshold activities is more than men. According to what is shown, femal are cooking, baking and washing up more than males around 40 min. Another things is note is that cleaing house and tidying is sharply heigher than men about the half. In addition, grading pet care for women are 30 min more than men. On the other hand, males who mairrenance odd jobes (50 min ) are more than females (20 min ). men are less spend minutes in clothes, washing, ironing, sewing than women from 10 min to 30 min respectively. To sumup, wr cloud say that females spend more minutes in household activities than males.
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men
and women that
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everyday
in England. It is
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from the graph that, time that
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females
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spend
in
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houshold
activities is more than
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men
. According to what
is shown
,
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femal
are cooking, baking and washing up more than males around 40
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. Another things
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note is that
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cleaing
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house
and tidying is
sharply
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than
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men
about the half.
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, grading pet care for women are 30
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more than
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men
.
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, males who
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mairrenance
odd
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jobes
(50
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are more than
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females
(20
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min
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.
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men
are less
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minutes in clothes, washing, ironing, sewing than women from 10
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min
to 30
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min
respectively
. To
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sumup
,
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cloud say that
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females
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more minutes in household activities than males.

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