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The chart shows the average monthly temperature in 3 major cities.

The chart shows the average monthly temperature in 3 major cities. gxMol

A glance at the diagram provided illustrates normal monthly temperature faraway places; namely Dubai, Paris, Sydney. All in all, the hottest days are undergone by Dubai whereas it is freezing in Paris. In first month, January, temperature in Sydney is just nearly 25°C and declines moderately to the lowest point just about 12⁰ Celsius in July. This is followed by noticeable growth to almost as high as its initial level in December. The figure for Dubai, meanwhile, witnesses an exponential increase from just nearly 20⁰ in January to a peak of just over 35⁰ C in August before plunging rapidly to somewhere in the vivinity of 22⁰C at the end. There is an enormous boom in temperature of Sydney from 5⁰ to 20⁰ between January and July, a rise of 15⁰ Celsius in 7 months. Then it remains stable in this temperature following a month and backs to former index 5⁰ in December.

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 faraway places; namely
 Dubai, Paris, Sydney.

All in all, the hottest days are undergone by Dubai whereas it is freezing in Paris.

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 of Sydney from 5⁰ to 20⁰ between January and July, a rise of 15⁰ Celsius in 7 months. Then it remains stable in this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheatcoldclimateconditionwarmth
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 following a month and backs to former index 5⁰ in December. 