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Map of a present campus university and past

Map of a present campus university and past GrGDB
The given pair of maps illustrate the lauout of campus of a university in the year of 2010 and that in current time. In 2010, there were university offices in the north that havebeen replaced by science building. A part from it, there was a teaching block for arts or science located in north east constructed the arts building. Moreover student accommodation hasbeen establish the shops in the south east. Further more, lake and lawn or seating area are adjacent to eachother in the center of campus university. Probing further, shops or restaurant have been constructed by student facilities like shop or office in the south west. In addition to it, there havebeen teaching block of both arts or science converted into arts building in the west. Overall, it can be seen that several alternation have taken place to the campus of university. Number of student accomadation has increased.
The
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pair of maps illustrate the
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lauout
of campus of a
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university
in the year of 2010 and that in
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current
time. In 2010, there were
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university
offices in the north that
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havebeen
replaced by science building. A part from it, there was a teaching block for
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arts
or science located in
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north east
constructed the
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arts
building.
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Moreover
student accommodation
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hasbeen
establish the shops in the
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south east
.
Further
more, lake and lawn or seating area are adjacent to
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eachother
in the center of campus
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university
. Probing
further
, shops or restaurant have
been constructed
by student facilities like shop or office in the
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south west
.
In addition
to it, there
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havebeen
teaching block of both
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arts
or science converted into
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arts
building in the west.
Overall
, it can be
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seen
that several alternation have taken place to the campus of
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university
. Number of student
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accomadation
has increased.
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IELTS academic Map of a present campus university and past

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
149 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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