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The picture provides information about the process of producing instant noodles for selling purposes.

The picture provides information about the process of producing instant noodles for selling purposes. 7PxOn
According to the diagram, there are 8 main stages in the process, beginning with providing flour to the storage silos and ending with packaging the finished products. The process commences with flour preservation in the big storage areas. In the next step, the flour is mixed with water and oil in an agitator. Following this, the mixture is spread by a roller into the dough sheets. After being cut into the long strips, the noodles are shaped to the discs by the machine. In the following stage, the noodles are moved to the frying process and dried to prepare for the packing step. Subsequently, the drying noodles are put in the cups and add vegetables and spices for flavor. The process concludes with labeling and sealing to prepare for delivery.
According to the diagram, there are 8 main stages in the
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process
, beginning with providing flour to the storage silos and ending with packaging the finished products.

The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
process
commences with flour preservation in the
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big
storage areas. In the
next
step, the flour
is mixed
with water and oil in an agitator. Following this, the mixture
is spread
by a roller into the dough sheets. After being
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
cut
into the long strips, the noodles
are shaped
to the discs by the machine.

In the following stage, the noodles are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
moved
to the frying
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process
and dried to prepare for the packing step.
Subsequently
, the drying noodles
are put
in the cups and
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add
vegetables and spices for flavor. The
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process
concludes with labeling and sealing to prepare for delivery.
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IELTS academic The picture provides information about the process of producing instant noodles for selling purposes.

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  American English
3 paragraphs
130 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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