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The picture gives information about changing in Stokeford village between 1930 and 2010.

The picture gives information about changing in Stokeford village between 1930 and 2010. RNM1G

The picture gives information about changing in Stokeford village between 1930 and 2010. In general, it is clear to see from the map, many things were changed over the 40 years, also rearranged, built and stayed the same place in the Stokeford countryside. The main changes were Key homes and Huge house although (bridge, primary school, post office, garden, farmland and shops) which were small ones. To begin with, a few places did not change such as Bridge and Post office but Shops and Garden of the Huge home were destroyed also a lot of Key houses were built instead of them. Other changes were Farmland was moved to south-west part of the map, right side of the river, and Primary school got bigger, two buildings were add to the main building. The last changing was the enormous home got extra two buildings which were the same size.

The picture gives information about changing in Possible spelling mistake found.Stoke ford
Stokeford
 village between 1930 and 2010.

In general
, it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 from the map, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 things were This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 over the 40 years, also
 rearranged, built and stayed the same place in the Possible spelling mistake found.Stoke ford
Stokeford
 countryside. The main This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 were Key homes and Huge This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 although (bridge, primary school, post office, garden, farmland and shops) which were This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 ones.

To This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
begin
 with, a few places did not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 such as Bridge and Post office This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 Shops and Garden of the Huge home were This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demolishedruined
destroyed
also
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 Key This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residences
houses
were built
instead
 of them. Other This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
Did you mean "where Farmland was"?where Farmland was
were Farmland was
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 to south-west part of the map, right side of the river, and Primary school This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 bigger, two buildings were Consider using a past participle here: "added".added
add
 to the main building. The last changing was the enormous home This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 extra two buildings which were the same size. 