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changes of the area around a river before and after a flood

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The diagram illustrates the changes that took place in an area around the Blackstone river prior to and following a flood. Many things are washed away by the floodwaters. Before the flood, there were houses and tress on both sides of the river. However, the floodwaters cleared all of them including bridge which was built across the river. Moreover, the Oxfow which flows in a curve way was cut off from the river by the flood causing it flowing straight. Although the flood destroyed many things around the river, a small village on one side of the river remained the same without being affected.
The diagram illustrates the
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that took place in an area around the Blackstone
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prior to and following a
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, there were
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houses
and tress on both sides of the
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river
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However
, the floodwaters cleared all of them including bridge which
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river
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Oxfow
which flows in a curve way was
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off from the
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river
by the
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causing it flowing straight. Although the
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flood
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destroyed
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many
things around the
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river
, a
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small
village on one side of the
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river
remained the same without being
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affected
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IELTS academic changes of the area around a river before and after a flood

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2 paragraphs
104 words
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