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The rendered chart elucidates how rectangular bricks are formed for multifarious construction industries. In the ab initio stage, clay is digged out with the help of a large digger. After this display must be put on rollers with metal grid. Before cutting the bricks with wire cutter and moulding it into different shapes and sizes, clay is mixed with sand and water. Unless bricks are dried in oven for 1 - 2 days, day can't be send to further processing in the kiln, where bricks are heated to intermediate temperature nearly 200°C to 900°C. Then heated to high temperatures (870°C-1300°C) and they are stored in cooling chamber for 2 to 3 days. In the penultimate stage, BRICS must be packaged and subsequently delivered to myriads of industries via vehicles. In sum and substance, this whole process encompasses with digging play and complete with delivery to construction factories. It is a very rigorous procedure, without a single step the whole work will come to a hault.

The rendered chart elucidates how rectangular You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstoneslabcinder block
bricks
are formed
 for multifarious construction industries.

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digged
 out with the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 of a large digger. “After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
After
 this display This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
be put
 on rollers with metal grid. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
Before
 cutting the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstoneslabcinder block
bricks
 with wire cutter and Possible spelling mistake. 'moulding' is British English.molding
moulding
 it into This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 shapes and sizes, clay is mixed
 with sand and water. Unless You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstoneslabcinder block
bricks
are dried
 in oven for Consider using an n-dash (half dash), if you want to indicate numerical ranges or time ranges.1 – 21–2
1 - 2
 days, day can't be Consider using a past participle here: "sent".sent
send
 to further
 processing in the kiln, where You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstoneslabcinder block
bricks
are heated
 to intermediate temperature nearly
Insert a space between the numerical value and the unit symbol "200 °C"200 °C
200°C
 to Insert a space between the numerical value and the unit symbol "900 °C"900 °C
900°C
. Then heated to high temperatures (Insert a space between the numerical value and the unit symbol "870 °C"870 °C
870°C
-Insert a space between the numerical value and the unit symbol "1300 °C"1300 °C
1300°C
) and they are stored
 in cooling chamber for 2 to 3 days. In the penultimate stage, BRICS This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
be packaged
 and subsequently
 delivered to myriads of industries via vehicles.

In sum and substance, this whole process encompasses with digging play and complete with delivery to construction factories. It is a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 rigorous procedure, without a single step the whole work will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 to a Possible spelling mistake found.faulthalthaulvaulthaunthauls
hault
. 