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hospital maps in 2007 and 2010

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These maps show the city hospital location and its surroundings in the year of 2007 and 2010. Overall, there has been developments in allocation of a dedicated public car park and a bus station in addition to, two interconnected roundabouts. In 2007, entering from the east end of the City Road towards west, Hospital Road could be accessed via a right turn. Hospital Road will lead to Ring Road, which goes around the hospital. Ring road opens up in the Nothern corridor of the car park which is common for staff as well as the public before re-connecting with the Hospital Road. This car park is situated in the East end of the Hospital Road. In 2010, a roundabout at the City Road-Hospital Road junction connects the newly established bus station on the west end of the Hospital Road. The bus station also communicates to another roundabout at the Ring Road-Hospital Road junction. This second roundabout also opens up to the bus station via a northern access. On the east border of the Hospital Road lies the staff car park of which the entrance is from the Ring Road. The east boundary of the Ring road opens up to a public car park.
These maps
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show
the city
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hospital
location and its surroundings in the year of 2007 and 2010.
Overall
, there has been developments in allocation of a dedicated public
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car
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park
and a bus
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station
in addition
to, two interconnected roundabouts.

In 2007, entering from the east
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end
of the City
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Road
towards west,
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Hospital
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Road
could
be accessed
via a right turn.
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Hospital
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Road
will lead to
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Ring
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Road
, which goes around the
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hospital
.
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Ring
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road
opens up in the
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Nothern
corridor of the
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car
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park
which is common for staff
as well
as the public
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before
re-connecting with the
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Hospital
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Road
. This
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car
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park
is situated
in the East
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end
of the
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Hospital
Road.

In 2010, a roundabout at the City Road-Hospital
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Road
junction connects the
newly
established bus
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station
on the west
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end
of the
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Hospital
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Road
. The bus
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station
also
communicates to another roundabout at the
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Ring
Road-Hospital
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Road
junction. This second roundabout
also
opens up to the bus
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station
via
Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply "northern access".
a northern access
. On the east border of the
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Hospital
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Road
lies the staff
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car
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park
of which the entrance is from the
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Ring
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Road
. The east boundary of the
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Ring
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road
opens up to a public
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car
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park
.
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3 paragraphs
203 words
6.0
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