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Most of the people do not care enough about environment issue. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

This proverb assert that " Heal the earth people heal ourself ". About environmental issue, there are same people do not care enough. I partially agree with this statement. The reason behind my indination are articulated in trailed paragraphs. To start with, there are lots of people spread dirt and that impact on environment. They spread dirt like, people throw waste here and there and even many people do not have knowledge about biowast so even government do advertisement to aware about biowast knowledge. Environment pollution rise because by industries factory waste for example in country there are some industries waste in sea, lake and river even their factories smoke also spread pollution and that impact on environment now every one have their own transportation, transportation also cause to environmental pollution and 30% environment pollution happen because of transportation. In industry, specially from based steel industry where impact of on environmental pollution. on the other hand, some people care about environment pollution. Some people can not throw their waste here and there Some made group to clean area. Many school and college student make group and they divided area and than area wise they clean that area and also make some charts and posters related save environment and in many school held the exhibition and competition related to environment save so, children and other people also aware about environment pollution. Some people do drama and advertisement so people aware about pollution. By agglomerating all the points elaborated above, it can be concluded that government and many people do advertisement to aware about pollution issues but people can to accompanied to protect environment indeed.
This proverb
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assert
that
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"
Heal the earth
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people
heal
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ourself
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"
. About environmental issue, there are same
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people
do not care
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enough
. I
partially
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with this statement. The reason behind my
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indination
are articulated
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To
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with, there are lots of
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people
spread dirt and that impact on
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environment
. They spread dirt like,
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people
throw
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waste
here and there and even
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many
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people
do not have knowledge about
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biowast
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so
even
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government
do advertisement to
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aware
about
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biowast
knowledge.
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Environment
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pollution
rise
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because
by
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industries
factory
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waste
for example
in country there are
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some
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industries
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waste
in sea, lake and river even their factories smoke
also
spread
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pollution
and that impact on
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environment
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now
every one have their
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own
transportation, transportation
also
cause to environmental
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pollution
and 30%
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environment
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pollution
happen
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because
of transportation. In
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industry
,
specially
from based steel
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industry
where impact of on environmental pollution.

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on
the other hand,
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some
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people
care about
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environment
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pollution
.
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Some
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people
can not throw their
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here and there
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made group to clean
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area
.
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and college student
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make
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group and
they divided
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area
and
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than
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area
wise they clean that
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area
and
also
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make
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some
charts and posters related save
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environment
and in
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many school
held the exhibition and competition related to
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environment
save
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, children and other
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people
also
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aware
about
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environment
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pollution
.
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Some
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people
do drama and advertisement
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so
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people
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aware
about pollution.

By agglomerating all the points elaborated above, it can
be concluded
that
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government
and
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many
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people
do advertisement to
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aware
about
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pollution
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issues
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but
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people
can to accompanied to protect
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environment
indeed
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IELTS academic Most of the people do not care enough about environment issue.

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  American English
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6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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