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The picture below shows the use of renewable energy accounting for the total energy from 1971 to 2006.

The picture below shows the use of renewable energy accounting for the total energy from 1971 to 2006. OVYjj

The line graph depicts the percentage of renewable energy consumption making up for the total energy in 6 Western countries over a 35-year period. It is clear that Finland held a dominant position of using green power in comparison with 5 other countries, while the UK’s utilization of alternative energy was the lowest between 1971 and 2006. Moreover, all six nations witnessed a slight increase by the end of the period. In 1971, Finland’s renewable energy consumption accounted for a quarter of its national total energy, followed by 9% of the figure for France. During the next years, the two countries witnessed the equivalent fluctuated trends and stood at 23% and 7% respectively by the end of the period. The green energy using by the US, Germany, Denmark and the UK in 1971 were marginally different, ranging from 3% to 1%. In the next 10 years, while 3 former nations followed an upward trend to just under 5%, there was a drop in the figure for the latter one. Germany continued growing its figure and reached a peak at 5% in 1996 before experiencing a decline to 3% in the final year. By 2006, the ratio of alternative energy consumption of the US, the UK and Denmark fluctuated and stood at 10% collectively.

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