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The graph shows the exchange rate of a Sterling Pound and Euro against Indian rupees in 2014. Summarise the Information by selecting and reporting the main features , and make comparison where relevant

The graph shows the exchange rate of a Sterling Pound and Euro against Indian rupees in 2014. oRd7X
Introduction & Overview: - The above graphs compare changes between exchange rates of Sterling Pound and Euro in Indian rupee over 2014. Overall, The exchange rate of both currencies fall against indian rupee in early half of the year. The Value of one Sterling Pound was higher than euro throughout the year/period. Body Part Comparision The pound-rupee exchange rate during the month of January'2014 was 103 rupee per Sterling Pound, as in further months, the exchange rate kept fluctuating, escpecially between the month of January to June and it had its highest peak value in month of March'2014 of 103. 5 rupee per Sterling Pound and after increase in value it had sudden drop in its exchange rate to 97. 5 rupee per Sterling Pound as its lowest value of entire year in month of November. By end of the value of pound-rupee exchange was gradually droped to 98 rupee. Whereas on the other side, The Euro was over 84 rupee in month of January'2014. Although, this value had drop in first five months to 80 rupees, after that it had minor rise in its value around 82 rupees for short period of time. And in futher months it had fall of 5 rupee on its exchange rate, settling the value around 77 rupee at the end of the year.
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The above graphs compare
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rates
of
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Sterling
Pound and Euro in Indian rupee over 2014.
Overall
, The
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rate
of both currencies fall against
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indian
rupee in early half of the year.

The
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Value
of one
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Sterling
Pound was higher than euro throughout the year/period.

Body Part
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Comparision


The pound-rupee
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exchange
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rate
during the
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month
of January'2014 was 103
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, the
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rate
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escpecially
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month
of January to June and it had its highest peak
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value
in
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month
of March'2014 of 103. 5
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per
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Sterling
Pound and after increase in
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value
it had sudden drop in its
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rate
to 97. 5
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Sterling
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of entire year in
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month
of November.

By
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to 98
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of January'2014. Although, this
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had drop in
first
five
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months
to 80 rupees, after that it had minor rise in its
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value
around 82 rupees for short period of time. And in
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futher
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it had fall of 5
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rupee
on its
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, settling the
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around 77
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