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The line graph gives information about the economic increase from 1995 to 2010. Four pie charts show the breakdown of household expenditure.

The line graph gives information about the economic increase from 1995 to 2010. Four pie charts show the breakdown of household expenditure. oRdlw

The line graph gives information about the economic increase from 1995 to 2010. Four pie charts show the breakdown of household expenditure. On the line graph we can see that till 2005 the economic growth slightly fluctuated. In 2005 it raised insignificantly (approximately for 3 per cent). After the increase, it fell sharply and significantly and in 2007 reached its lowest level (-5 per cent). Then (in 2010), it grew a little and became the same as it was in 1995. On the pie charts we can see that household expenditure in housing was the same in 1995, 2005 and 2010. Moreover, spending on this area was the largest in these 3 pie charts. In contrast to that, in 2000 people spent more on food than on housing. As for clothing, entertainment, and travel, they were the same in almost every pie chart. Only in 2005, household expenditure in these spheres were bigger than spending on food. (157 words)

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show
 the breakdown of household expenditure.

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Only
 in 2005, household expenditure in these spheres were bigger than spending on food. (157 words)