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The picture below shows the possible wave-energy for generating electricity

The picture below shows the possible wave-energy for generating electricity YRnwd
The diagram provides the information of the structure of the process of manufacturing electric energy from the movement of surf and assistance of machine. As we can see in this image, the wave motor includes three main parts: wave system device, turbine, generator. And this pictorial obtains four core key stages starting with strong repulsion of water to push the air, finishing with coming back from the atmosphere to water. The primary step, the heavy direction of water, pushes the air to the left entrance. Ready for the next stage, this air makes the turbine rotate and is activated to generate electricity. Then, It continues to move out on the other side of this system. Subsequently, it turns back to this machine and comes out at the right entrance. Turning to the final step, it still goes to its “home”- water. Eventually, this is the cycle artificial process to produce the electric power.
The diagram provides the information of the structure of the process of manufacturing electric energy from the movement of surf and assistance of machine.

As we can
see
in this image, the wave motor includes three main parts: wave system device, turbine, generator. And this pictorial obtains four core key stages starting with strong repulsion of water to push the air, finishing with coming back from the atmosphere to water.

The primary step, the heavy direction of water, pushes the air to the
left
entrance. Ready for the
next
stage, this air
makes
the turbine rotate and
is activated
to generate electricity. Then, It continues to
move
out on the other side of this system.
Subsequently
, it turns back to this machine and
comes
out at the right entrance. Turning to the final step, it
still
goes to its “home”- water.
Eventually
, this is the cycle artificial process to produce the electric power.
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IELTS academic The picture below shows the possible wave-energy for generating electricity

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