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The picture below shows the changes of a park from 1980 to now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The picture below shows the changes of a park from 1980 to now. BBKV
The maps show changes in the layout of a park between 1980 and the present. In general, the park is now more accessible and has several new facilities to serve different recreational demands of the public. In 1980, there was one pathway running through the park from the west gate to the south gate. A number of trees were located in the northeast, and flowers were planted along the south wall. There was also a pond with several benches around it situated on the eastern side of the park. Between 1980 and now, the path was removed and replaced with a new path which leads to all four sides of the park, and essentially divides it into four different areas. In the southwestern corner, the pond and benches are still intact, but the flowers in that area have been replaced with bushes. A new picnic area with tables and a barbecue grill has been set up in the northeastern corner, while the southeastern corner is now a dedicated playing field.
The maps
show
changes
in the layout of a
park
between 1980 and the present.

In general
, the
park
is
now
more accessible and has several new facilities to serve
different
recreational demands of the public.

In 1980, there was one pathway running through the
park
from the west gate to the south gate. A number of trees
were located
in the northeast, and flowers
were planted
along the south wall. There was
also
a pond with several benches around it situated on the eastern side of the park.

Between 1980 and
now
, the path
was removed
and replaced with a new path which leads to all four sides of the
park
, and
essentially
divides it into four
different
areas. In the southwestern corner, the pond and benches are
still
intact,
but
the flowers in that area have
been replaced
with bushes. A new picnic area with tables and a barbecue grill has
been set
up in the northeastern corner, while the southeastern corner is
now
a dedicated playing field.
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IELTS academic The picture below shows the changes of a park from 1980 to now.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
170 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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