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The chart shows how Promo Plus in Istanbul fluctuated over a period of 12 months

The chart shows how Promo Plus in Istanbul fluctuated over a period of 12 months LL6A6
The chart shows how Promo Plus in Istanbul fluctuated over a period of 12 months. It is observed that in the first month of 2007, Promo Plus sales stood at 200 million turkish lira and rose slightly to reach about 225 million in February. This was followed by another increase, although much steeper, in March when sales where almost 125 million turkish lira higher than February. However, this upward trend was suddenly broken and sales plummeted dramatically over the next 4 months to reach a little over 100 million turkish lira in July. August sales showed a significant rise back to January levels as figures nearly doubled, but this was not to last as they dropped again in September to the same level as they were in July. October came with a small increase of about 100 million turkish lira in sales, after which sales figures levelled off and remained relatively static over the last two months of 2007. Overall, Promo Plus in Istanbul remained relatively unchanged in 2007 as January and December sales were fairly equal. Also, sales were at their highest in March while the weakest sales figures could be observed in July and September.
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how Promo Plus in Istanbul fluctuated
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over
a period of 12
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months
. It
is observed
that in the
first
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month
of 2007, Promo Plus
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sales
stood at 200
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million
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turkish
lira and rose
slightly
to reach about 225
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million
in February. This
was followed
by another increase, although much steeper, in March when
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sales
where almost 125
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million
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turkish
lira higher than February.

However
, this upward trend was
suddenly
broken and
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sales
plummeted
dramatically
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over
the
next
4
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months
to reach a
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little
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over
100
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million
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turkish
lira in July. August
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sales
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showed
a significant rise back to January levels as figures
nearly
doubled,
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but
this was not to last as they dropped again in September to the same level as they were in July. October came with a
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small
increase of about 100
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million
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turkish
lira in
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sales
, after which
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sales
figures levelled off and remained
relatively
static
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over
the last two
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months
of 2007.

Overall
, Promo Plus in Istanbul remained
relatively
unchanged in 2007 as January and December
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sales
were
fairly
equal.
Also
,
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sales
were at their highest in March while the weakest
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sales
figures could
be observed
in July and September.
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