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The charts below give information on the ages of population of Yemen and and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.

The charts below give information on the ages of population of Yemen and and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. 6xNxW
The chart illustrates the information on the ages of the population of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. According to the chart, In year 2000 the ages between 0-14 years was 50. 1% and it is predicted to be 37. 0% in year 2050. Ages between 15-59 years was 46. 3% and assumed to be 57. 3% in 2050, whereas ages above 60 years was small in number 3. 6% in year 2000 and was projected to be 2050 respectively. As per the chart, In Italy 61. 6% of overall population was covered by 15-59 years, Whereas it was projected to decrease at 46. 2% in years 2050. Similarly, 24. 1% of ages between above 60 years was counted between ages 15-59 years. And 14. 3% of population was covered by ages 0. 14 years and was assumed to be 11. 5% respectively. To sum up, In both Yemen and Italy the population of ages betwwen 15-59 years was highest in year 2000 and decreases and increases in year 2050 respectively. In Yemen the population of age group 0-14 years was 50. 1% and then decreases to 37. 0% and In Italy the population of age group 0-14 years was 14. 3% and decreases to 11. 5% in year 2050 respectively
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of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.

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2000 the
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between 0-14 years was 50. 1% and it
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to be 37. 0% in
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2050.
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between 15-59 years was 46. 3% and assumed to be 57. 3% in 2050, whereas
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small in number
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2000 and
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As per the chart, In Italy 61. 6% of
overall
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population
was covered
by 15-59 years, Whereas it
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decrease
at 46. 2% in years 2050.
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between above 60 years
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15-59 years. And 14. 3% of
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0. 14 years and
was assumed
to be 11. 5%
respectively
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To sum up, In both Yemen and Italy the
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betwwen
15-59 years was highest in
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2000 and
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decreases
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2050
respectively
. In Yemen the
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population
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group 0-14 years was 50. 1% and then
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decreases
to 37. 0% and In Italy the
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population
of
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group 0-14 years was 14. 3% and
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decreases
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2050
respectively
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IELTS academic The charts below give information on the ages of population of Yemen and and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.

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