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The picture below shows a place in 1980 and after the construction of a hydroelectric dam in 1990. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The picture below shows a place in 1980 and after the construction of a hydroelectric dam in 1990. BBE9

The maps illustrate the significant changes in an area where a hydroelectric dam was built between 1980 and 2000. With these changes, the area was almost totally transformed with the disappearance of many natural parts, the construction of a new dam and towers, and the transformation of the river. In 1980, green parts of the area such as forest, architect structure and the area for rare plants and animals were located to the west of the river, but they were totally removed in 2000. Also, irrigated land to the east of the river was demolished to make way for a hotel. The most significant changes happened in the north of the area. First of all, a hydroelectric dam was built in the north end of the river to stop the stream. There was also a construction of electricity towers around the dam to generate electricity. Besides, the river was widened in its mid-segment to store water. Finally, the village was relocated to the north-east corner of the area.

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changes
 in an You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 where a hydroelectric You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbarrierdikeleveegateditchbank
dam
was built
 between 1980 and 2000.

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area
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 transformed with the disappearance of This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 natural parts, the construction of a new You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbarrierdikeleveegateditchbank
dam
 and towers, and the transformation of the river.

In 1980, green parts of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 such as forest, architect structure and the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 for rare plants and animals were located
 to the west of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtributaryestuarystream
river
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 they were totally
 removed in 2000. Also
, irrigated land to the east of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtributaryestuarystream
river
was demolished
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 way for a hotel.

The most significant This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 happened in the north of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
. This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, a hydroelectric You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbarrierdikeleveegateditchbank
dam
was built
 in the north This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtributaryestuarystream
river
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceasediscontinue
stop
 the stream. There was also
 a construction of electricity towers around the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbarrierdikeleveegateditchbank
dam
 to generate electricity. Besides
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtributaryestuarystream
river
was widened
 in its mid-segment to store water. Finally
, the village was relocated
 to the north-east corner of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
. 