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The given maps sketch out how a town has changed with a hydroelectric power dam constructed.

The given maps sketch out how a town has changed with a hydroelectric power dam constructed. PG22

The given maps sketch out how a town has changed with a hydroelectric power dam constructed. As shown in the illustration, the area was divided into two regions by the river with mountains at every angle in 1990. The structure was the same in 2010, but there existed a construction of a new fishing lake at the beginning of the river. Having a closer look at the details, it is explicitly observed that in 1990, the west area to the river was wild with forest and ancient structure to the northwest, rare plants and animals to the middle east while in the east area, there was a village and irrigated farmlands. Those things however disappeared in 2010, giving place to many other constructions except for the villages. It is interesting to note that the structure was a complete difference from that of 1990. To build a new lake, the river flow was interrupted by the mountain. Along the two sides of the river, lots of electricity poles appeared mainly on the west side while in the east there are villages other than the poles. A huge hotel was also constructed by the fishing lake for commercial purposes.

The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 maps sketch out how a town has This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 with a hydroelectric power dam constructed.

As shown in the illustration, the area was divided
 into two regions by the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtributaryestuarystream
river
 with mountains at every angle in 1990. The structure was the same in 2010, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 there existed a construction of a new fishing lake at the beginning of the river.

Having a closer look at the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
, it is explicitly
 observed that in 1990, the west area to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtributaryestuarystream
river
 was wild with forest and ancient structure to the northwest, rare plants and animals to the If the term is a proper noun, use initial capitals.Middle East
middle east
 while in the east area, there was a village and irrigated farmlands. Those things however
 disappeared in 2010, giving place to This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 other constructions This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :with the exception of
except for
 the villages.

It is interesting to note that the structure was a complete difference from that of 1990. To build a new lake, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtributaryestuarystream
river
 flow was interrupted
 by the mountain. Along the two sides of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtributaryestuarystream
river
, lots of electricity poles appeared mainly
 on the west side while in the east there are villages other than the poles. A huge hotel was also
 constructed by the fishing lake for commercial purposes. 