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The pictorial diagram depict the information about the process of making an instant noodles.

The pictorial diagram depict the information about the process of making an instant noodles. jo9qw

The pictorial diagram depict the information about the process of making an instant noodles. To commence with, noodle is made from the silos and for that large amount of silos is needed and it is transported to the production house and where it is stored in a container. Now the process begin by adding oil and water into the flour and put it in the mixer so that it completely mixed up and dough comes out on the sheet. After that, the dough on the roller passes through the machine that change its shape in strips and then in noodle discs. Next step is that the noodle disk is deep fried in oil and kept for drying. Additionally, noodle are now filled in a cup which already contain vegetable and spices. Lastly, the automatic machine will seal the cup and label it properly and delivered it to the consumer and enjoy the instant noodle.

The pictorial diagram depict the information about the process of making an instant noodles.

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noodle
is made
 from the silos and for that large amount of silos is needed
 and it is transported
 to the production This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 and where it is stored
 in a container. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
Now
 the process This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
begin
 by adding oil and water into the flour and put it in the mixer This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that it completely mixed up and dough This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approachesarrives
comes
 out on the sheet. After that, the dough on the roller passes through the machine that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 its shape in strips and then in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoconut
noodle
 discs. Next
 step is that the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoconut
noodle
 disk is This word is normally spelled with hyphen.deep-fried
deep fried
 in oil and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retained
kept
 for drying.

Additionally
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoconut
noodle
 are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 filled in a cup which already contain vegetable and spices. Lastly
, the automatic machine will seal the cup and label it properly
 and delivered it to the consumer and enjoy the instant You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoconut
noodle
. 