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the pia chart points out the results of a survey indicating popular music preferences among the youth of age 14 to 19 years in the UK.

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The pie chart indicating the results of standard music preferences based on the survey in the UK among the population of age between 14 and 19. The data has been calibrated in percentage. Overall, it can be clearly seen from the pie chart that, the most significant number of people prefer rap music only while, the least significant number of population choose classical music only. Firstly, over the half per cent of 14 to 19 year old population prefer to listen rap songs only. However, alternative music is also on trend in people who's age is between 14 and 19, it comprised a quarters. Secondly, a tiny amount of population wants to listen classical music only, it accounted for 2% only. Nevertheless, country and rock and roll music also average popular among the youth of age from 14 to 19 years old in the UK, where data is reported 10% and 13% respectively. To cap it all, it can be vividly manifested that only 2% adults like to listen classical music in the contrary the highest number of people supporting to rap music.
The pie chart indicating the results of standard
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preferences based on the survey in the UK among the
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population
of age between 14 and 19. The data has
been calibrated
in percentage.

Overall
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clearly
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from the pie chart that, the most significant number of
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people
prefer rap
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music
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only
while, the least significant number of
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population
choose classical
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music
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only
.

Firstly
, over the half per cent of 14 to 19 year
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old
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population
prefer to listen rap songs
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.
However
, alternative
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music
is
also
on trend in
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people
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who's age
is between 14 and 19, it comprised
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a quarters
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Secondly
, a tiny amount of
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population
wants to listen classical
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music
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only
, it accounted for 2%
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only
.
Nevertheless
, country and rock and roll
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music
also
average popular among the youth of age from 14 to 19 years
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old
in the UK, where data
is reported
10% and 13%
respectively
.

To cap it all, it can be
vividly
manifested that
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only
2% adults like to listen classical
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music
in the contrary the highest number of
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people
supporting to rap
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music
.
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IELTS academic the pia chart points out the results of a survey indicating popular music preferences among the youth of age 14 to 19 years in the UK.

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