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The table illustrates the satisfaction level of male and female members of a sports club about their activities, facilities and opening hours. Overall, it is readily apparent that the female members were highly content with the opening hours while the male members rated more positively towards club facilities. Regarding the types of club activities, male members showed a comparable interest by rating 55% as very satisfied. In contrast, only 35% of females were highly satisfied with that category. Turning to the club facilities, both female and male 'very satisfied' ratings were nearly similar at 64% and 63% respectively. However, the percentage of the females (14%) who disliked this particular category was slightly higher than the male (10%) dissatisfaction level. When it comes to the opening hours, females showed the highest satisfactory at 72%, which was their favorite out of all the other factors. Only 3% of female members were unhappy about the operating hours. The number of males who voted very satisfied were considerably lower at 44% whereas, 37% disliked the same category.
The table illustrates the satisfaction level of male and
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members
of a sports
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club
about their activities, facilities and opening hours.

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readily
apparent that the
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female
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members
were
highly
content with the opening hours while the male
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members
rated more
positively
towards
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club
facilities.

Regarding the types of
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club
activities, male
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members
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showed
a comparable
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interest by
rating 55% as
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very
satisfied.
In contrast
,
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only
35% of
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females
were
highly
satisfied with that category. Turning to the
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club
facilities, both
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female
and male '
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very
satisfied' ratings were
nearly
similar at 64% and 63%
respectively
.
However
, the percentage of the
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females
(14%) who disliked this particular category was
slightly
higher than the male (10%) dissatisfaction level.

When it
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comes
to the opening hours,
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females
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showed
the highest satisfactory at 72%, which was their favorite out of all the other factors.
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Only
3% of
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female
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members
were unhappy about the operating hours. The number of
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males
who voted
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very
satisfied were
considerably
lower at 44% whereas, 37% disliked the same category.
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IELTS academic sports club about their activities, facilities and opening hours.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
173 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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