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The chart of residents of five cities in Australia who buy or drink coffee

The chart of residents of five cities in Australia who buy or drink coffee KyNk9

The chart describes the percentage of the residents of Australia who have habits of drinking and buying coffee in the last four weeks. Besides, buying fresh coffee or instant coffee and going to a cafés data are analyzed. Among five cities, buying fresh coffee habits, Sydney has the highest percent which is 43% than other four cities. Melbourne has 42. 5% and Hobart had 38%, and they stay in the middle range. The lowest nature of buying fresh coffee cities are Adelaide and Brisbane which have nearly 34% each. On the other hand, having a habit of buying instant coffee data is unexpectedly various in these cities. The highest to the lowest ratio of cities are Hobart, Brisbane, Adelaide, Melbourne, and Sydney, and their percentages slightly decrease from 54% to 45%. The last data represents the residents who went to the café in five cities. Melbourne's, Hobart's and Sydney's citizen go to café a lot, and they have the greatest percentage around 64% to 61%. The city of Brisbane has a middle range of 55% and Adelaide follows from the last with 49%. In summary, these five cities have the highest style of going to the café and the residents rarely buy fresh coffee than instant coffee.

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describes


the percentage

of the residents

of Australia who have habits

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of
 drinking and buying

coffee

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in
 the last four weeks. Besides
, buying

fresh

coffee

or instant coffee

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and
 going to a cafés data are analyzed
.

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cities
, buying

fresh

coffee

habits, Sydney has the highest percent

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which
 is 43% than other four You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmetropoliscentermunicipalitydowntownplacecapital
cities
. Melbourne has 42. 5% and Hobart had 38%, and

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of buying

fresh

coffee

cities

are Adelaide and Brisbane which have nearly


34% each.

On the other hand
, having a habit

of buying

instant coffee

data is unexpectedly


various

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of cities

are Hobart, Brisbane, Adelaide, Melbourne, and Sydney, and their percentages

slightly


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decrease
 from 54% to 45%.

The last data represents the residents

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who
 went to the café in five You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmetropoliscentermunicipalitydowntownplacecapital
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citizen


go to café a lot, and they have the greatest percentage

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around
 64% to 61%. The city of Brisbane has a middle range of 55% and Adelaide follows from the last with 49%.

In summary, these five cities

have the highest style

of going to the café and the residents

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buy


fresh

coffee

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than
 instant coffee. 