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the percentage of travelling by car to go to work in different countries

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The table gives information about various modes of transportation and the amount of consumer use of them in four countries including USA, UK, France and the Netherlands. The chart illustrates specific statistic of the most factors of choosing car over other options to go to work opted by respondents of a survey in USA. By far, traveling by car features in the first position in the list of each country. For instance, 90 percent of Americans prefer to commute to their workplace by car. However, among these countries, the lowest quantity of car drive to work belongs to the residents of Holland, by just under %50. On the other hand, the least favorite category is cycling, except for people from Holland, which had chosen public transportation as their last choice to go to work. According to the bar chart, the majority of Americans, almost 40 percent, travel to their work by their own car because they have no other alternative for it. Additionally, about 30 percent of participants said that the car is required for their career. Also, a low quantity of nearly 10 percent cited their nightshifts as the reason behind using their own car to get to work. In conclusion, a great number of people in these four countries, prefer to get to their workplace by their own car. And according to American people, this is mostly due to the fact that there are no better options rather than driving their own vehicle.

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