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the percentage of the urbanization in South Korea and Indonesia from 1969 to 2009

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The chart illustrates the percentage of the urbanization in South Korea and Indonesia from 1969 to 2009. Overall, there were an increase in the proportion of urbanization in both South Korea and Indonesia, with the South Korea’s city development rate witnessed the most dramatic rise. It is also clear that South Korea has the highest figures over the period. The proportion of urbanization in South Korea was at 28%, after which this figure saw a significant grow to 70% in 1989, which is nearly triple the figure for Indonesia in the same period. In addition, similar changes can be seen in the figure for Indonesia, started at 18%, but then increased gradually after the first year by 26% in 1989. From 1989 onwards, the percentage of urbanization in Indonesia continued to in increase at the same rate, reaching 50% in 2004. Meanwhile, the figure for South Korea reached a peak in 1999 at 83% then remained stable to the end the period.

The chart illustrates the percentage of the urbanization in South Korea and Indonesia from 1969 to 2009.

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