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Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons between the honey-bee colonies and the honey production.

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons between the honey-bee colonies and the honey production. RwO9Y

The charts depict information about the number of honey-bee colonies and the amount of honey that had been produced between 1970 and 2010 in the United States. Overall, the honey-bee colonies had some similarities with the honey production, they decreased from 1970 to 2010, but there was an exception in 1980. The number of honey-bee colonies started at 4 millions in 1970, then reached the peak in 1980 with 4, 2 millions of colonies. But it no longer declined significantly in the next 3 years, from 3, 5 millions in 1990 to 1, 7 millions in 2010. During the same period, the amount of honey that had been produced in 1970 started at 130, 000 tonnes, but it then quickly fell to 110, 000 tonnes in 1980. 1990 saw a slight climb in the quantity of honey production, but there was a considerable decline from 1990 to 2010, hit the lowest point and ended up at 70, 000. A phenomenon appeared between the honey-bee colonies and the production of honey from 1990 to 2010, in which the honey-bee colonies seemed to affect the honey production greatly.

The charts depict information about the number of honey-bee You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprovinceterritoryoutpostprotectorate
colonies
 and the amount of honey that had been produced
 between 1970 and 2010 in the United States.

Overall
, the honey-bee You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprovinceterritoryoutpostprotectorate
colonies
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some
 similarities with the honey You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmanufacturemanagementconstructionmanufacturing
production
, they decreased from 1970 to 2010, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 there was an exception in 1980.

The number of honey-bee You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprovinceterritoryoutpostprotectorate
colonies
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started
 at 4 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
millions
 in 1970, then reached the peak in 1980 with 4, 2 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
millions
 of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprovinceterritoryoutpostprotectorate
colonies
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 it no longer declined significantly
 in the next
 3 years, from 3, 5 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
millions
 in 1990 to 1, 7 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
millions
 in 2010.

During the same period, the amount of honey that had been produced
 in 1970 This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 at 130, 000 tonnes, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 it then quickly
 fell to 110, 000 tonnes in 1980. 1990 This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 a slight climb in the quantity of honey You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmanufacturemanagementconstructionmanufacturing
production
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 there was a considerable decline from 1990 to 2010, hit the lowest point and ended up at 70, 000. A phenomenon appeared between the honey-bee You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprovinceterritoryoutpostprotectorate
colonies
 and the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmanufacturemanagementconstructionmanufacturing
production
 of honey from 1990 to 2010, in which the honey-bee You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprovinceterritoryoutpostprotectorate
colonies
 seemed to affect the honey You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmanufacturemanagementconstructionmanufacturing
production
greatly
. 