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the percentage of population computer ownership and level of education in yearly between 2002 to 2010

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The two bar graph have been shown that provinding an data regarding the proportion of population by computer owner and level of education during the period of 2002 and 2010. overall, it is evident that the given two figures computer ownership and level of education had upsurged in the every year. According to former graph, In 2002, the proportion of population by computer right of possesion by nearly 60% proportion. Moreover, next two years, ownership had soared the proption of exactly three ~fifth. In addition, In 2006, accounted by round about two~third proportion. In 2008 and 2010 had been rosen by 65% and 70% respectively. heading towards the later diagram, , In 2002, the education level was five percent less seven in ten proprtion in no high school; however, in 2010 was four in ten porpotion. Furthermore, high school graduate by one third porpotion in 2002; on the contrary, In 2010, it was the doubled in contrast 2002 in 2010. Beside this, just over half proportion of collage in 2002; conversily, nearly nine in ten proportion in 2010 Moving further, In 2002, bachelor's degree and post graduate degree had been rocketed. More specifically, 90% and 95% seperately. In 2010, 70% and 80% correspondly.
The two bar graph have
been shown
that
provinding
an
data regarding the
proportion
of population by computer owner and level of education during the period of 2002 and 2010.
overall
, it is evident that the
given
two figures computer ownership and level of education had upsurged in the every year.

According to former graph, In 2002, the
proportion
of population by computer right of
possesion
by
nearly
60%
proportion
.
Moreover
,
next
two years, ownership had soared the
proption
of exactly three
~fifth
.
In addition
, In 2006, accounted by round about
two~third
proportion
. In 2008 and 2010 had been
rosen
by 65% and 70%
respectively
.

heading
towards the later diagram,
,
In 2002, the education level was five percent less seven in ten
proprtion
in no high school;
however
, in 2010 was four in ten
porpotion
.
Furthermore
, high school graduate by one third
porpotion
in 2002;
on the contrary
, In 2010, it was the doubled
in contrast
2002 in 2010. Beside this,
just
over half
proportion
of collage in 2002;
conversily
,
nearly
nine in ten
proportion
in 2010

Moving
further
, In 2002, bachelor's degree and post graduate degree had
been rocketed
. More
specifically
, 90% and 95%
seperately
. In 2010, 70% and 80%
correspondly
.
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