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The pie chart and tabular data presents the percentage of fish imported from various countries and its total financial value respectively. Overall market expansion and ongoing competition can be observed from the given information. Tabular data depicts the increment of investment made in importing fish since 1988. Initially, 6. 57 billion dollars were being invested in this market. This value increased steadily in the period of 12 years, attaining a final figure of 10. 72 billion dollars in 2000. The Pie chart exhibits the competition among different exporters of fish. In the start, Canada was the biggest exporter of fish who captured 60% market of US, whereas China ranked the second one with the market share of 13% in 1988. This market share of China increased to 20% and 30% in 1992 and 2000 respectively. On the other hand, reduction in market share of Canada was observed in the period of 12 years, reaching the lowest trough of 28%. Significant increase of other importers in fish market of US accounting only 27% share in 1988 to the extremely large value of 42% in 2000 shows that the fish market is now more competitive.
The pie chart and tabular data presents the percentage of fish imported from various countries and its total financial value
respectively
.
Overall
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market
expansion and ongoing competition can
be observed
from the
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given
information.

Tabular data depicts the increment of investment made in importing fish since 1988.
Initially
, 6. 57 billion dollars were
being invested
in this
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market
. This value increased
steadily
in the period of 12 years, attaining a final figure of 10. 72 billion dollars in 2000.

The Pie chart exhibits the competition among
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different
exporters of fish. In the
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, Canada was the biggest exporter of fish who captured 60%
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market
of US, whereas China ranked the second one with the
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market
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share
of 13% in 1988. This
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market
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share
of China increased to 20% and 30% in 1992 and 2000
respectively
.
On the other hand
, reduction in
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market
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share
of Canada
was observed
in the period of 12 years, reaching the lowest trough of 28%. Significant increase of other importers in fish
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market
of US accounting
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27%
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in 1988 to the
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