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the percentage of people with televisions and computers in selected countries.

the percentage of people with televisions and computers in selected countries. WE8Mb

The bar chart illustrates the proportion of people using TVs and computers in seven countries. In general, television was more popular than computers in selected countries. Besides, the United States was the country that gained the highest rate of computer users. Particularly, the proportion of American and French TV ownership, constitute 80% and 60%, overwhelming the other countries. In addition, a staggering 60% of the computer’s users were American, which was doubled as high as the equivalent percentage of France. It could be seen at an average level, the percentage of people possessing TV in the United Kingdom was as same as Sweden, approximately 50%. Moreover, the gap between the popularity of televisions and computers in Sweden was not measurable. Meanwhile, the corresponding discrepancy in Britain was up to 20%. Turning to the other countries, it was under 30% of people having a television. Similarly, approximately 5% of Saudi Arabians and Filipinos had their computers. In contrast, Korea was the only country, which Korean favored computers over TVs, with roughly 40% for the former and 30% for the latter

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