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The chart shows male and female graduates from the Higher Colleges of Technology colleges in the UAE.

The chart shows male and female graduates from the Higher Colleges of Technology colleges in the UAE. gxbd3
The given bar chart illustrates the number of male and female graduates who are from the Higher Colleges of Technology colleges(HCT) in the UAE. From an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that HCT graduates in Dubai for women is in the highest point and women graduate more in all given colleges. First of all, let's look at the colleges with a great deal of graduates which Dubai women's college is in the above of the list with 547 graduates and 426 graduates for men respectively. Following this, the tendency is a bit lower accounting 273 and 293 graduates in Abu Dhabi that is as nearly a half as Dubai. The number of graduates in Al Ain Women's college reached 218, while this figure accounts for only 131 for men. The number of Sharjah women's college graduates, however, is 186, accompanied by a low of 165 for men. 178 women graduate Ras Al Khaimah and it is a mere of 102 for men.
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who are from the Higher Colleges of Technology colleges(HCT) in the UAE. From an
overall
perspective, it is
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apparent that HCT
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graduates
in Dubai for women is in the highest point and women
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graduate
more in all
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colleges.

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which Dubai women's college is in the above of the list with 547
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and 426
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graduates
for
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men
respectively
. Following this, the tendency is a bit lower accounting 273 and 293
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graduates
in Abu Dhabi
that is
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nearly
a half as Dubai. The number of
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in Al Ain Women's college reached 218, while this figure accounts for
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131 for
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men
. The number of
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,
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. 178 women
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Ras
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Khaimah
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