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the percentage of people living in the UK per age group without any qualifications in 2009

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The bar chart illustrates the percentage of people living in the UK per age group without any qualifications in 2009. There was a slight fluctuation in the percentage of the number of females and males per age groups. For people between the ages of 17-19 and 20-24, these age groups followed the same pattern that the percentage of men was higher than the percentage of female. However, for people between 25-29, the percentage of male and female was exactly the same at approximately 8 percent. Likewise, the percentage of people between 30-39 still remained the same. For people between 40-49, the percentage of female increased significantly, while the percentage rose slightly. The percentage of male between 50-59/64 was more than 15 percent, while the percentage of female was 20 percent. Overall, the percentage of men and women between 17-49 was quite low, if compared to the percentage of people between 50-59/64.
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group without any qualifications in 2009. There was a slight fluctuation in the
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of 17-19 and 20-24, these
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groups followed the same pattern that the
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was higher than the
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was exactly the same at approximately 8 percent.
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remained the same.

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between 40-49, the
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increased
significantly
, while the
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rose
slightly
. The
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of male between 50-59/64 was more than 15 percent, while the
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was 20 percent.

Overall
, the
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and women between 17-49 was quite low, if compared to the
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