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The diagram below shows the production of electricity using a system called Ocean Thermal Energy Conversion (OTEC).

The diagram below shows the production of electricity using a system called Ocean Thermal Energy Conversion (OTEC). Q1mL

The diagram illustrates how to produce electricity by using the OTEC system. It can be seen that creating energy are divided into two sections: warm seawater and cold seawater. While the former is producing drink water, the latter are going to be waste saltwater. To start with, solar energy assists to convert warm seawater into water vapour. Then, the drops of water evacuated in the evaporation chamber before travelling through the turbine which creates electricity. Steam is continuing into the tube toward condensing chamber which makes it water for drink purposes. With regards to the cold water, between 29 C and 5 C under 1000 m of sea, it is cycling around the condensing chamber and mixes with the rest of the salt that has been coming from the steam stage. Last but not least, the stream is going to be produced as waste saltwater.

The diagram illustrates how to produce electricity by using the Possible spelling mistake found.OPECOTCOECTECO TECOT EC
OTEC
 system. It can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 that creating energy are divided
 into two sections: warm seawater and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :chillyfrosty
cold
 seawater. While the former is producing drink You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
, the latter are going to be waste saltwater.

To This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 with, solar energy assists to convert warm seawater into You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
Possible spelling mistake. 'vapour' is British English.vapor
vapour
. Then, the drops of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 evacuated in the evaporation chamber This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 travelling through the turbine which creates electricity. Steam is continuing into the tube toward condensing chamber which This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createsconstructsmanufacturesproduces
makes
 it You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 for drink purposes.

Use "in regard to", "with regard to", or more simply "regarding".In regard toWith regard toRegarding
With regards to
 the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :chillyfrosty
cold
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
, between 29 C and 5 C under 1000 m of sea, it is cycling around the condensing chamber and mixes with the rest of the salt that has been coming from the steam stage. Last This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 not least, the stream is going to be produced
 as waste saltwater. 