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Charts 1 and 2 below show the proportion of income spent on different areas by young people in Canada and Poland. Chart 3 shows the average age of certain life events for these countries and an estimated global average age. Write a report summarising the information. Select and describe the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

Charts 1 and 2 below show the proportion of income spent on different areas by young people in Canada and Poland. Chart 3 shows the average age of certain life events for these countries and an estimated global average age. Write a report summarising the information. Select and describe the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. KLK6

The two charts provide information about the expenditure of people under 35 on five several sectors in two different countries: Canada and Poland. Whereas, the third chart illustrates the typical age of three life in these two countries and a predicted global average age. Overall, the income spent in Canada is distributed quite equally in each areas, while, in Poland young people use the majority amount of money in studies and transport. In addition, regarding the average age of events, Poland can be considered as the closed one to the estimated values. the first result worth pointing out is that the income in Canada is split in a proportional way, so that the percentages fluctuate from 14%, spent in transport, and 20% in leisure area. By contrast, in Poland, the under 35 prefers to invest in studies, at 43%, and roughly one quarter in transport. On the other hand, the lowest preferred categories are housing and food both at 5%. Another trend that can be observed is the significant difference between Canada’s average age of the events and the predicted ones. For example, Canadian get married around the age of 31, whereas the estimation is ten years before, 21 years old.

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 of three life in these two countries and a predicted global average age.

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 as the closed one to the estimated values.

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 result worth pointing out is that the income in Canada is split
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 that the percentages fluctuate from 14%, spent in transport, and 20% in leisure area. By contrast, in Poland, the under 35 prefers to invest in studies, at 43%, and roughly one quarter in transport. On the other hand
, the lowest preferred categories are housing and food both at 5%.

Another trend that can be observed
 is the significant difference between Canada’s average You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyouthmaturitylifeold age
age
 of the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionshappenings
events
 and the predicted ones. For example
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 married around the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyouthmaturitylifeold age
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 of 31, whereas the estimation is ten years This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
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