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The population of insects have increased just under 40%, and this is caused by the habitat destruction (43%). Pollution is another significant reason of the changing of wildlife population (21%) while the other figures experience less than a fifth as to influence such population changing. These factors can cause the inhabtants of freshwater fish, birds, and reptiles have decreased. A more details look at the charts, show that a decrease of more 26% fish amount has lived in freshwater is caused by the over exploitation, and this also decrease the rate of birds at under one in ten per cent. Surprisingly, the number of either mammals or aquatic mammals have increased while the other figures have declined. Overall, the significant reason of why wildlife population changes is the habitat destruction. This has caused the number of freshwater fish and insects number witness a marked fall.

The population of insects have increased just under 40%, and this is caused by the habitat destruction (43%). Pollution is another significant reason of the changing of wildlife population (21%) while the other figures experience less than a fifth as to influence such population changing. These factors can cause the inhabtants of freshwater fish, birds, and reptiles have decreased. A more details look at the charts, show that a decrease of more 26% fish amount has lived in freshwater is caused by the over exploitation, and this also decrease the rate of birds at under one in ten per cent. Surprisingly, the number of either mammals or aquatic mammals have increased while the other figures have declined. Overall, the significant reason of why wildlife population changes is the habitat destruction. This has caused the number of freshwater fish and insects number witness a marked fall. Byj9
The given information represent the main reasons of why the population changes from 2000 to present in the pue chart while the bar chart shows the proportion alter in the wildlife's inhabitants. The population of insects have increased just under 40%, and this is caused by the habitat destruction (43%). Pollution is another significant reason of the changing of wildlife population (21%) while the other figures experience less than a fifth as to influence such population changing. These factors can cause the inhabtants of freshwater fish, birds, and reptiles have decreased. A more details look at the charts, show that a decrease of more 26% fish amount has lived in freshwater is caused by the over exploitation, and this also decrease the rate of birds at under one in ten per cent. Surprisingly, the number of either mammals or aquatic mammals have increased while the other figures have declined. Overall, the significant reason of why wildlife population changes is the habitat destruction. This has caused the number of freshwater fish and insects number witness a marked fall.
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(21%) while the other figures experience less than a fifth as to influence such
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in freshwater
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decrease the rate of birds at under one in ten per cent.
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is the habitat destruction. This has caused the number of freshwater fish and insects number witness a marked fall.
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IELTS academic The population of insects have increased just under 40%, and this is caused by the habitat destruction (43%). Pollution is another significant reason of the changing of wildlife population (21%) while the other figures experience less than a fifth as to influence such population changing. These factors can cause the inhabtants of freshwater fish, birds, and reptiles have decreased. A more details look at the charts, show that a decrease of more 26% fish amount has lived in freshwater is caused by the over exploitation, and this also decrease the rate of birds at under one in ten per cent. Surprisingly, the number of either mammals or aquatic mammals have increased while the other figures have declined. Overall, the significant reason of why wildlife population changes is the habitat destruction. This has caused the number of freshwater fish and insects number witness a marked fall.

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